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Originally Posted by Silverwolf

All things to consider:

I have shown this to two other people other than yourself and I have gotten very different feed backs. Your major complaint was that it was too condescending. The other two actually liked the brazen attacks and aloof arrogance I fabricated/allowed to flow a little too naturally through out.

In my thinking, it moves away a little from the 'Cracked Style,' and into a piece which emphasizes yourself more than "we here at Cracked." That's part of one of their guides to writing on their message board.

Also one of them said that when I started talking science it left dry periods with too few laughs.

Another complaint was that it might be a little too pic heavy.

These two make sense, now that you mention them.